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James



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PostSubject: Tracers: Bloom Squad introduction scene   Wed Feb 09, 2011 1:28 am

Here's my first draft of the scene where we meet the Bloom Squadders for the first time.
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PostSubject: And this isn't really the first time we see Madison & Bailey   Sat Feb 26, 2011 4:47 pm

I think we should have an introductory scene with Madison and Bailey walking through a farmer's market or some similar public place. The camera is on these two so the audience knows they are the primary characters. Off camera in the distance we see Mr. Black looking them over. One of them notices him watching them and he gives her a big grin and points at her as if to say "I see you." Understandably, this creeps her out and subsequently they both leave.
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