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Join date : 2010-10-22
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PostSubject: Movie-based flash fiction: Visor   Fri Jan 14, 2011 2:15 am

God. I almost don't want to put this up. It's bad. But it's also stalling and grinding in my head in a pointless circle despite being much more of a scene or two than a complete story. But my plotting brain is apparently rebelling. So. Better to put it up with the comfort that we probably won't use it. Probably the biggest problem is I don't remember a lot of the parameters on the ability itself, so if there are details off, please forgive. Razz
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PostSubject: Visor   Tue Jan 25, 2011 1:05 am

I think you're being a little too self-critical, Kelsey. This is actually quite good and provides some intriguing back story. You're right, this scene may not find a home in the film we are currently working on but anything we know about our characters and where they are coming from as they enter the time frame of our film is useful. And happy birthday, by the way.
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